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When I Think Back

I think of days
When we were young
All giggles and easygoing
No grey clouds overhead 
Life seemed so sweet
Dreams of fluff and pink chiffon
We were so innocent and giddy
Two school girls out having fun
Those are the days I remember
Of carefree you and me



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
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Barden Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Beautiful verse of friendship and what's truly important in this life ... love. Love this, Line. :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much, Gregory. Most appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Wonderful! Well written. I have to guess that girl is still in you but so much more now.
Gauthier Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:33 PM
A schoolbus friend in grade 9 and 10. We went to different schools and actually dabbled in poetry. It was wonderful.
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