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For Joseph May's Palindrome Limerick Poetry Contest

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When I Tattled on Ana

An undisciplined terrible tot,
Ana did awful things quite a lot.
Uncle Bob she did kick.
I told Dad. With a stick,
a good spanking my sis at last got!

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Joseph May

June 1, 2024 at 6:35 AM

Very nicely done Andrea, Congrats on your win

Crystol Woods

May 31, 2024 at 5:16 PM

Wonderful Limerick

Terry Miller

May 31, 2024 at 9:17 AM

Excellent entry in this challenging competition, not only funny but a true limerick rhythm congratulations

Janice Canerdy

May 31, 2024 at 8:22 AM

Excellent~~skillfully written, Andrea! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Sara Kendrick

May 15, 2024 at 5:24 AM

Cute one. I can imagine that would be very gratifying for a sibling. I had a brother at home who was 25 years older than me, really old enough to be my father so I did not have anyone to tattle on. LOL..Thanks for sharing this one with us. I am guessing for a contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Mike Bayles

May 14, 2024 at 8:04 AM

Nice limerick, Andrea. And nice humor.

Duke Beaufort

May 13, 2024 at 6:47 PM

Andrea, I hope this didn't happen for real. Corporal punishment always disturbs me. The limerick is great!!

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2024 at 10:58 PM

Oh no. Just fiction. It's so hard to come up with an original funny limerick!

Paige Hind

May 13, 2024 at 10:54 AM

LOL! -enjoyed

Daniel Henry Rodgers

May 13, 2024 at 8:50 AM

Dear Andrea, What a delightful twist of humor and linguistic skill. The playful narrative of Ana's mischievous antics, encapsulated within the constraints of a palindrome, showcases your creativity and mastery of form. Your ability to infuse humor into poetry while maintaining its structural integrity is truly commendable. Andrea, this is such a whimsical gem that brings joy to the reader's heart. - Blessings, Daniel

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2024 at 10:46 PM

Thanks for these sweet words

Ink Empress

May 13, 2024 at 6:09 AM

Well ofcourse you are an English teacher you know how to perfectly use them palindromes and ofcourse you are just amazing at limericks! Love this! Made me smile! Best wishes for the contest sweet andrea. This is truly perfect