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When I Stop Loving You

When dawn's light is drawn from the moon And morning dew arrives in the afternoon When willows rejoice instead of weeping And promises are no longer worth keeping When artists paint only in dull shades of gray And stars abandon the realm of the Milky Way When a pen and ink no longer can I find When love is a word that can be defined That will be the moment when I stop loving you And my heart forever dwell in a world of blue

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/4/2017 9:22:00 PM

I loved Daniels comment, when a poet can touch another like that, well for me makes the poem that much more special! :)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/7/2017 7:03:00 PM

And your comment is also special. Thank you so much, Arthur.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/4/2017 5:45:00 AM

Aha! I like this, wish such a moment would never come, Lin:) like you happy:)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/4/2017 5:51:00 AM

Hiya, Jo. I'm a happy lady to have known love. Thanks so much...hugs

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/3/2017 12:12:00 PM

Hi Lin, i would never see you getting the blues, there shall always be someone there to make sure this never happens. An excellent write as always from your golden pen. I always love the way you set your poetry, each write becomes a gem. Your heart shall always sing. This is definitely a little fave. Hugs....mike. XX

Lin Lane
Date: 6/4/2017 5:50:00 AM

Hi Mike. You're such a gem of a friend. Thanks for liking this one and the sweet remarks.