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When I Stop Loving You

When dawn's light is drawn from the moon
And morning dew arrives in the afternoon

When willows rejoice instead of weeping
And promises are no longer worth keeping

When artists paint only in dull shades of gray
And stars abandon the realm of the Milky Way

When a pen and ink no longer can I find
When love is a word that can be defined

That will be the moment when I stop loving you
And my heart forever dwell in a world of blue

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Joanna Daniel Date: 6/4/2017 5:45:00 AM Aha! I like this, wish such a moment would never come, Lin:) like you happy:) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/4/2017 5:51:00 AM Hiya, Jo. I'm a happy lady to have known love. Thanks so much...hugs

Vladislav Raven Date: 6/3/2017 12:12:00 PM Hi Lin, i would never see you getting the blues, there shall always be someone there to make sure this never happens. An excellent write as always from your golden pen. I always love the way you set your poetry, each write becomes a gem. Your heart shall always sing. This is definitely a little fave. Hugs....mike. XX Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/4/2017 5:50:00 AM Hi Mike. You're such a gem of a friend. Thanks for liking this one and the sweet remarks.

Daniel Turner Date: 6/2/2017 9:04:00 AM I love you, Lin. You have your own special place, right here in my heart:) Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/2/2017 11:27:00 AM Thanks for the sweet comment, Danny. Love from peaches.

Jan Allison Date: 5/31/2017 4:58:00 PM Let's hope that day never comes Lin and you never get the blues:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/2/2017 11:18:00 AM Thank you, Jan. So far, so good.

Tim Smith Date: 5/31/2017 2:51:00 PM Very lovely Lin...I hope the blue stays away Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 6/2/2017 9:13:00 AM Thank you very much, Tim. Only blue is in my sky.