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When I See You

I must tell you something You always know how to make my day When I see your smile...I grin When I hear your laugh...I laugh When I feel your hugs....I know they are filled with love When I hear your voice...I fill up with butterflies When I see you look at me...I can only make eye contact for less then a second before the pain returns It makes me sad that we aren't each others... When I see you unhappy...I want to do anything to make you happy once again When I hear you cry...I cry When your in pain..I know I did something to cause the pain When I hear your voice...I fill with sadness When I see you look at me...I can only make eye contact for less then a second before the pain returns I guess what I'm trying to get at is that I need you and want you in my life from here on out! After today I hope when I see you I don't fill pain but with butterflies I love you...my lil monster :(

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Date: 3/26/2011 3:39:00 PM
This is my first time visiting your poetry and I'm really glad I did, I've been going through a rough time lately and the poets writing on here is the only thing really keeping my spirits high anymore... I was wondering if you could look at my latest poem and maybe give me some advice.. I need all the advice I can get...
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:00:00 PM
thank you guys for the positive encouragement to keep writing :)
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Date: 3/21/2011 4:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mary. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2011 7:05:00 PM
Creative and thoughtful write, Mary
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Date: 3/19/2011 4:44:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoyed your poetry with it's creative theme... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. our contests are free.. please check them out luv..
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