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When I Look In Your Eyes

When I look in your eyes, I feel my world changing around me. The ground begins shaking at my feet. Buildings crash all around us. The sky fades to a purplish-black. Animals run for cover, Taking with them all they have. When I look in your eyes, A new feeling takes over my soul. My heart beats faster. My breathing quickens, My hands shake uncontrollably. I can't feel my legs beneath me. Yet, still I stand before you. When I look in your eyes, I long to know what this feeling is. This new creation my mind has made me. I need to know what my heart is feeling, Why this madness has begun. You say you have an answer for me, And you say that answer is love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 5:04:00 PM
Wonderful description of 'that look'. You brought out some creative details that are so true.
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Tahnee Frtiz
Date: 12/11/2013 7:13:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/6/2013 8:35:00 AM
Lovely expressions on yearning of love, Tahnee
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Tahnee Frtiz
Date: 12/11/2013 7:12:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/6/2013 7:18:00 AM
2 hearts ready for a new unison...this is deep. May it shine! Nicely done!
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Tahnee Frtiz
Date: 12/11/2013 7:12:00 PM
Thanks!

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