When I Look In Your Eyes

I feel  just secured
looking into your bright eyes
your smile is reassuring,
My weakness exposed
as I rest on your shoulders
smooth vibes passing through  my spine.

It`s just magnetic
looking sternly at your  eyes
electrostatic passion,
induced by deep love
flows through me,pulling me through..
As light in your eyes brightens .




CONTEST:"Re-write one of my poems" sponsored by Catie Lindsey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Re-Write" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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October 21, 2012 at 11:46 AM
An excellent write Olusegun, congratulations on your win in Catie's contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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October 21, 2012 at 10:00 AM
congratulations friend Olusequn on your win. cheers!! (^_^)
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October 20, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Olusegun, congratulations with your win...pd
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October 20, 2012 at 7:20 PM
Wow! You did it in the contest my dear friend, Olosegun! My hearty congratulations on your awesome win, too! Have a wonderful day in sunshine always! love, Leonora
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October 20, 2012 at 1:07 PM
CONGRATS OLUSEGUN ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS AMAZING RE-WRITE OF CATIE'S LOVELY POEM LUV ..
Wellington Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 12:58 PM
Beautiful and o so sweet. Love it! Congrats. One love, Joy Wells
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 1:05 AM
Enjoyed seeing how you would do this. So was that the title of Catie's poem as well? When I look in Your eyes?
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