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When I Look In Your Eyes

I feel just secured looking into your bright eyes your smile is reassuring, My weakness exposed as I rest on your shoulders smooth vibes passing through my spine. It`s just magnetic looking sternly at your eyes electrostatic passion, induced by deep love flows through me,pulling me through.. As light in your eyes brightens . CONTEST:"Re-write one of my poems" sponsored by Catie Lindsey

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Re-Write" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 10/21/2012 11:46:00 AM

An excellent write Olusegun, congratulations on your win in Catie's contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/21/2012 10:00:00 AM

congratulations friend Olusequn on your win. cheers!! (^_^)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/20/2012 9:24:00 PM

Olusegun, congratulations with your win...pd

Len Gasun

Date: 10/20/2012 7:20:00 PM

Wow! You did it in the contest my dear friend, Olosegun! My hearty congratulations on your awesome win, too! Have a wonderful day in sunshine always! love, Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/20/2012 1:07:00 PM

CONGRATS OLUSEGUN ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS AMAZING RE-WRITE OF CATIE'S LOVELY POEM LUV ..

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/20/2012 12:58:00 PM

Beautiful and o so sweet. Love it! Congrats. One love, Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2012 1:05:00 AM

Enjoyed seeing how you would do this. So was that the title of Catie's poem as well? When I look in Your eyes?