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When I Let One Loose In the Elevator

When I let one loose in the elevator, I was totally alone at the time; so, I started singing but I was no imitator, my squeaky voice just seemed to climb and climb ! It was not singing but more like chalk on a black board, but, who cares I was thinking because I am alone; so out of me the song poured and poured, until a lady entered saying, "did you hear that awful moan" ______________________ August 4, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/When I Let One Loose In The Elevator Copyright Protected, ID 08-1378-721-04 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the c Standard contest, When I Let One Loose In The Elevator sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 08/09/2021 Second Place

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Date: 8/10/2021 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a funny story/write. Thanks for the laugh. I needed that. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2021 11:39:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and comment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/9/2021 10:27:00 PM
Dear Constance, reading contest poems and smiling, it was good fun. Congratulations...Delice
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Date: 8/10/2021 11:39:00 AM
Delice, thanks for the comment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/9/2021 5:01:00 PM
Back with my congratulations on your win in the contest, well done Constance… Belle
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Date: 8/10/2021 11:40:00 AM
Belle, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/9/2021 3:02:00 PM
Dropping back with many congratulations on your win Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2021 11:41:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/9/2021 7:37:00 AM
Unique! Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2021 11:42:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/9/2021 6:58:00 AM
Luckily you were alone. :-) congratulations on your winning placement.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2021 11:42:00 AM
Joanna, thanks for the comment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/9/2021 6:56:00 AM
LOL Constance...and you told me you you couldn't write funny. I beg to differ :) Great write, thanks for the laughs! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2021 11:44:00 AM
Charles, thank for the inspiration and contest, it was fun. I guess I CAN write funny ! And thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 4:11:00 PM
That’s hilarious Constance, I often sing when in the elevator alone, but quietly because it’s a dreadful drone… Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 8/5/2021 11:15:00 AM
Belle, thanks for visiting my poem, lol I am a moan and you are a drone ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 2:03:00 PM
LOL. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:31:00 PM
Gina, thanks for the comment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 11:13:00 AM
Hi Constance, A fun write and a great contender for the contest Well penned my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:32:00 PM
Jennifer, thanks for the comment and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 10:28:00 AM
lol great humour Constance I needed a smile after today's sad news:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:33:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the comment, happy you liked my poem ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/4/2021 8:44:00 AM
Lol! BW, This is hilarious. I could just picture the whole scenario. I am still laughing. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/4/2021 3:33:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the comment, happy it made you laugh ~ love and serenity _Constance

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