Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

When I Let One Loose In the Elevator

When I let one loose in the elevator,
I preferred to be on an escalator
It seemed to worsen every floor
With no escape, just a tightly closed door!

People turned around, looking at me
When one pushed the emergency button to flee
Somehow, we came to a sudden halt
And I knew it was time to admit my fault!

8/2/21

Entry for When I let one loose in the elevator contest.  Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Lindsay Laurie August 12, 2021 at 6:07 PM Hello Heidi ... it appears it's impossible to keep your secret to yourself - thanks Heidi - Lindsay Heidi Sands August 12, 2021 at 9:32 PM LoL. Thanks Lindsay :)

Caren Krutsinger August 7, 2021 at 11:20 AM Good luck in the contest; I think this is was delicately done, Heidi. Heidi Sands August 7, 2021 at 1:29 PM Thank you Caren. I hope your day is going well :)

Indiana Shaw August 6, 2021 at 5:41 AM O' if only I could leave my gas behind . . . ; ) Heidi Sands August 6, 2021 at 5:49 AM Lol. Thank you for your visit Indiana. I think we are in the clear :)

Mike Gentile August 5, 2021 at 6:16 AM This must have been a 'blast from the past" Heidi!! Good Luck !! Heidi Sands August 5, 2021 at 6:38 AM LOL I am glad it never happened Mike. Thanks. Happy Thursday :)

Jennifer Proxenos August 4, 2021 at 12:46 PM This is hysterically funny, and it happens to us all, and the more we try to hide it, the more we are exposed. Good one Heidi, Blessings and hugs and good luck my friend. Jennifer. Heidi Sands August 4, 2021 at 1:00 PM Thank you Jennifer. Blessings :)

Quoth Theraven August 3, 2021 at 8:30 PM I just love this high brow humor Heidi. Guffaws for all my fun-loving friends! Enjoy the contest, I know I am. -Richard Heidi Sands August 4, 2021 at 7:03 AM Thank you Richard. I appreciate your comments :)

Lady Labyrinth August 3, 2021 at 5:50 PM Say 3 Hail Mary's. And all shall be forgiven. lol...I Love it. Heidi Sands August 3, 2021 at 5:59 PM LoL. Thank you! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2021 at 2:12 AM - Funny, Heidi ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands August 3, 2021 at 5:43 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham August 3, 2021 at 1:03 AM Lol, never admit to it. Well written Heidi and good luck. Tom Heidi Sands August 3, 2021 at 5:43 AM Lol. Ok Tom. Thank you :)

Alexis Y. August 2, 2021 at 3:30 PM Lol! Heidi, This is funny. But I must admit I would have stayed quiet in my shame. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Heidi Sands August 2, 2021 at 3:35 PM Thank you Alexis :)