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When I Let One Loose In the Elevator

When I let one loose in the elevator, I preferred to be on an escalator It seemed to worsen every floor With no escape, just a tightly closed door! People turned around, looking at me When one pushed the emergency button to flee Somehow, we came to a sudden halt And I knew it was time to admit my fault! 8/2/21 Entry for When I let one loose in the elevator contest. Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/12/2021 6:07:00 PM

Hello Heidi ... it appears it's impossible to keep your secret to yourself - thanks Heidi - Lindsay

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2021 9:32:00 PM

LoL. Thanks Lindsay :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/7/2021 11:20:00 AM

Good luck in the contest; I think this is was delicately done, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/7/2021 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Caren. I hope your day is going well :)

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/6/2021 5:41:00 AM

O' if only I could leave my gas behind . . . ; )

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2021 5:49:00 AM

Lol. Thank you for your visit Indiana. I think we are in the clear :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/5/2021 6:16:00 AM

This must have been a 'blast from the past" Heidi!! Good Luck !!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2021 6:38:00 AM

LOL I am glad it never happened Mike. Thanks. Happy Thursday :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/4/2021 12:46:00 PM

This is hysterically funny, and it happens to us all, and the more we try to hide it, the more we are exposed. Good one Heidi, Blessings and hugs and good luck my friend. Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/4/2021 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer. Blessings :)