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When I Let One Loose In the Elevator

When I let one loose in the elevator,
I preferred to be on an escalator
It seemed to worsen every floor
With no escape, just a tightly closed door!

People turned around, looking at me
When one pushed the emergency button to flee
Somehow, we came to a sudden halt
And I knew it was time to admit my fault!

8/2/21

Entry for When I let one loose in the elevator contest.  Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Lindsay Laurie Date: 8/12/2021 6:07:00 PM Hello Heidi ... it appears it's impossible to keep your secret to yourself - thanks Heidi - Lindsay Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/12/2021 9:32:00 PM LoL. Thanks Lindsay :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 8/7/2021 11:20:00 AM Good luck in the contest; I think this is was delicately done, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/7/2021 1:29:00 PM Thank you Caren. I hope your day is going well :)

Indiana Shaw Date: 8/6/2021 5:41:00 AM O' if only I could leave my gas behind . . . ; ) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/6/2021 5:49:00 AM Lol. Thank you for your visit Indiana. I think we are in the clear :)

Mike Gentile Date: 8/5/2021 6:16:00 AM This must have been a 'blast from the past" Heidi!! Good Luck !! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/5/2021 6:38:00 AM LOL I am glad it never happened Mike. Thanks. Happy Thursday :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 8/4/2021 12:46:00 PM This is hysterically funny, and it happens to us all, and the more we try to hide it, the more we are exposed. Good one Heidi, Blessings and hugs and good luck my friend. Jennifer. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/4/2021 1:00:00 PM Thank you Jennifer. Blessings :)

Quoth Theraven Date: 8/3/2021 8:30:00 PM I just love this high brow humor Heidi. Guffaws for all my fun-loving friends! Enjoy the contest, I know I am. -Richard Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/4/2021 7:03:00 AM Thank you Richard. I appreciate your comments :)

Lady Labyrinth Date: 8/3/2021 5:50:00 PM Say 3 Hail Mary's. And all shall be forgiven. lol...I Love it. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/3/2021 5:59:00 PM LoL. Thank you! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/3/2021 2:12:00 AM - Funny, Heidi ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/3/2021 5:43:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/3/2021 1:03:00 AM Lol, never admit to it. Well written Heidi and good luck. Tom Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/3/2021 5:43:00 AM Lol. Ok Tom. Thank you :)

Alexis Y. Date: 8/2/2021 3:30:00 PM Lol! Heidi, This is funny. But I must admit I would have stayed quiet in my shame. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/2/2021 3:35:00 PM Thank you Alexis :)