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When I Leave This World

When I leave this world It won’t be silently NO, I will leave behind a note A note of reproach For the sin of humanity In the inability to feel with…to feel for To truly love Another human being Who has the curse of being…. Different When I leave this world My words I’ll behind To a world that was unkind To a world that only loved Cookie cutter shapes and sizes A world with a status quo That couldn’t be tampered with A world that embraced The lovely The beautiful The happy….oh the happy Those with perpetual smiles With lilting voices of angels And with beauty of the ages Those worthy of love Serene angelic doves Who never felt despair But were always bright and fair When I leave this world I will leave behind A legacy for those Who were unloved Who didn’t have sound minds Who struggled along the way Who tried to be beautiful Who tried to smile Through ripped and aching hearts Who tried to stay afloat When others would just gloat Those who tried to be brave But longed for the grave To those I will say “You are beautiful You are worthy You are precious You are priceless Your mind though tormented Is full of beautiful treasure Don’t blame yourself For not being able to fit In this selfish and crazy world You are not a misfit The world is unable To make itself fit To the dazzling beauty of you So, just do what it takes Just do what it takes To get through the pain To get to tomorrow Maybe, maybe You’ll hear my voice Whisper to you in the breeze Telling you to make the world A better place A more caring place Because of YOU!" Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/14/2013 11:08:00 AM
Powerful words coming from a kind heart!! Thanks for sharing your wise words...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/14/2013 10:12:00 AM
A strongly necessary message. "Because of you"...indeed. Excellent.
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Date: 10/14/2013 1:38:00 AM
A river of feelings, a waterfall of emotions and a hymn to the unappreciative! Excellent work that sums up life as it is! Eileen, you have to stay and not go, your voice of concern is in great need! Fantastic!
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Date: 10/14/2013 12:41:00 AM
Eileen this is one of your best, all of us flawed and strangely beautiful people join with you in praise of our strangeness. To heck with cookie cutter perfection! There is much for us to celebrate. This goes to favorites.
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Date: 10/13/2013 6:28:00 PM
Sad but true commentary here my little Desert Orchid. I'm with Peter on this, I don't give a monkey's either for the pomposity of this world. Take care, Richard
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Date: 10/13/2013 4:53:00 PM
Tmfvs!!!!
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Date: 10/13/2013 4:52:00 PM
Aw gee this is beautiful.Many times I asked myself why i do not walk on diamond on rubies.Why did i have to be born in a place where i tasted heartache..pain ..Why did i have to have a childhood where my dad was nearly always ill.Why did i have to work hard instead of continuing my studies and get to graduation.But then I get your answer and it fills me with comfort and strength to know i still fit in this selfish world..Tnks for this beautiful poem dear..Its lovely
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Date: 10/13/2013 4:30:00 PM
very powerful and wise...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/15/2013 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, my sweet Ilene. You are a dear! :)

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