When I Get To Heaven

“When I Get To Heaven” 
As I walked to her bedroom door, I paused to wipe a tear.
I had to stay strong, God would take her soon, this 
child that I loved so.
 Dawn was breaking as I stood at her door, frozen in 
time. I gazed upon this child, hoping this moment 
would never end. 
As she lay there quietly, my emotions overwhelmed me,
this beautiful child of only six, she didn’t understand life, death, Heaven. eternal life. 
 I wanted her to stay, I wanted to take her place.
I wanted to pretend nothing  was wrong ….going back in my mind, to before she was sick, and remembering, wishing, hoping..and yet  knowing I had to let God take her home.
As I started to walk in her room, I stopped, as I saw her tiny hands fold 
in prayer. 
Her voice, so soft, so quiet  she began to pray.
“Jesus, when I get to Heaven, will Mommy and Daddy 
be there, will they be happy to see me, and will they 
hug me when I get there, will my puppy be there and 
will my toys be there too, will there be music, and do I get to see Grandma and Grandpa again  and oh I almost forgot to ask, will everybody love each other, thank you, Jesus, Amen”

Tears streaming down ….
I walked to her bedside, and held her close as she smiled and  closed her eyes.

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Date: 8/4/2022 5:56:00 PM
OMG—this is heart wrenching! What a sad story and so beautifully and expressively written. I was caught off guard when it was revealed that a child would be leaving to heaven, so sad, but an excellent narrative, it almost felt real or even personal. Thank you for sharing this, even if it brought tears.
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Date: 7/31/2022 7:48:00 PM
Heartbreaking concept, but well written. Thank you for sharing this, as I'm sure it was difficult to write.
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