When I First Read Your Eyes

To true friendship...



Though it be fifty years ago
                      That I first read your eyes
The story that they guaranteed
                      Has ne’er worn a disguise
 
That friends forever, we would be
                   Through life’s uncertain ride
And always I have felt the love
                       Of your voice by my side

It’s not that quarrels never tripped
                  Or knocked us to the ground
It’s that the bond that made us one
                  Preserved the love we found

On mornings such as this, I think
               Through fog and mist and rain
Of that first time I read your eyes
                     The sun then shines again

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Date: 8/6/2025 8:59:00 PM
This is such a gentle and heartfelt tribute to enduring friendship. The rhythm flows like memory itself—soft, nostalgic, and full of light. That last stanza? Just beautiful.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2025 4:58:00 AM
Rowena, thank you so much !!!
Date: 7/8/2025 9:59:00 AM
I always enjoy reading your lovely work. What a wonderful write. They say, "the eyes are the window to the soul." Have a lovely day writing away........
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/8/2025 12:02:00 PM
So sweet of you to bestow such a lovely compliment Paula, thank you xxoo
Date: 6/21/2025 7:13:00 AM
Awwn thats so poetic and beautiful! What a stunning line " when i first read your eyes" its original lines such as that which i get to enjoy reading, that makes me appreciate soup! This is so heartfelt and soulfully moving and flows in such a seamless manner! May that love forever remain strong and firm: Pleasure visiting your page today! Sending you light always!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/22/2025 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink Empress!
Date: 6/20/2025 4:30:00 PM
aww this is so darn romantic and through thick and thin we still love that lovelight in their eyes:-) Mike this is truly beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/22/2025 7:25:00 AM
Thank you dear Jan xxoo
Date: 6/20/2025 10:55:00 AM
- How beautifully written...true love in good and "bad" days :) - Have a wonderful weekend, Mike :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/22/2025 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 6/20/2025 9:59:00 AM
Mike your wife and partner for evermore special, you loved her from the day you first Read her eyes. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/22/2025 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer for your lovely words xxoo
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