Frank Daub Poet Rhyme

When I Fall

When I Fall
By Frank Daub

When I fall unaware of sin,	
is God aware of me? Does He	
see sin as second chance to win	
Eternity?	

And if eternity’s the prize	
Which degree will I find there?	
The brightened streams of Paradise	
Or the tempest--blackened air?

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Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2026 at 1:46 AM I like this. As for levels on heaven, you gotta watch the near death experience of Howard Storm on YouTube. Or a series of them on John Burke Imagine Heaven podcasts. They are very eye opening and inspiring . No blackened air in paradise! But I am sure you know that already