When I Fall

When I Fall
By Frank Daub

When I fall unaware of sin,	
is God aware of me? Does He	
see sin as second chance to win	
Eternity?	

And if eternity’s the prize	
Which degree will I find there?	
The brightened streams of Paradise	
Or the tempest--blackened air?
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