When I Die

With sight forever closed
	And voice eternally locked
	Shine still will the immortal sun
	Birds at my wake keep sing on to life as incense burn
When I die;
	In neat dis-order, ants will march
	And buzzing silently the bees shall lament
	While I shall lie still,
	All gone stealth and stilt.
	Finally dead from undying death  
	With sightless eyes and mirthless mirth, my bane.
When I die .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Idiong Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 8:49 AM
I commend your The daring subject matter of the poem and sound use of literary devices by the poet.
O'Leary Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:58 AM
'Undying death'! Very nice... Terry
Noel Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:18 PM
thanks terry....
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