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When I Die

As my spirit look down on the flesh, Will it be angry or happy at death, Will the life that I have lived be an inspiration, Or will the whispers be negative conversations, Will the church be full or will it be empty, Will the tributes be 2,or will it be plenty, Will the few that knew me laugh at me, Or will children and elders cry for me, Killed violently,would someone die for me, Would my over-seas friends,really fly for me, When "Across the Bridge"is sung,and the dust thrown in, Will I be spotless or filled with sin, Will the pastor preach that the Lord I had found, When I am burnt or put under the ground, Will my kids be comforted,I prepared for death, Or will they be angry,I left them in debt, One thing is for sure,death for the living, So live your life to the the fullest,from the beginning....

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Date: 8/12/2021 10:28:00 AM
thoughts on the worth our journey brings out are often inspirational . nice write.
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:57:00 AM
Wonderful write, really we all want to know if we will be cried at the time of death or even remembered after death
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/11/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/5/2014 5:52:00 PM
Hey man just wanna say thanks for the comment on my poem, I really dig your stuff, really good printing
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/11/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thank u,just posted something new
Date: 11/24/2013 11:26:00 PM
This is amazing work here, Richard! I enjoyed this to the fullest :) Most are curious of death, and I find it a very mysterious subject myself :) I love the thought and questions put into this :) again, Amazing work! ^_^ ~Destiny
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Richard Palmer
Date: 4/24/2014 5:13:00 PM
thnk you very much Destiny
Date: 12/24/2012 9:42:00 AM
We were on the same page, right? Enjoyed this very much.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/24/2012 9:57:00 AM
yes we were David,thanks for the visit
Date: 9/12/2012 10:01:00 AM
thanx for you comment!when i die hmmm
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/21/2012 3:41:00 PM
hahaha,hmmmm Chipepo
Date: 9/6/2012 12:11:00 AM
Very nice write! Death is always the big Q but don't worry death is our true state life is just our dream (and what a beautiful dream it is)but someday everyones alarm goes off.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/6/2012 8:44:00 AM
thanks much Daniel
Date: 8/11/2012 10:38:00 PM
hi richard its truly beautiful... neethu
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/12/2012 3:23:00 PM
thanks Neethu,welcome to the mind of Richard
Date: 8/11/2012 3:14:00 PM
I really like this write, I'm sure most people as well as myself, have the same questions. Thank you for the comment. Michelle
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/12/2012 3:22:00 PM
thanks much Michelle
Date: 7/23/2012 6:37:00 PM
Wow are you sure I didn't write this.Ha I love this poem many questions I tend to wonder .. I loved the way it just flowed
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/23/2012 7:27:00 PM
thanks Carmen,wonder some more,lol
Date: 7/16/2012 6:24:00 AM
Powerful thoughts with rich meaning. May this be a wake-up call to all that our life is so very short. May we come to christ while we still have the time! God bless you! JP
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/16/2012 9:31:00 AM
thanks Jim,hope so too
Date: 7/14/2012 10:45:00 AM
What a superb piece of writing, Richard! Well rhymed with a pleasing cadence. '...spotless or filled with sin,' '...whispers be negative conversations,' great phrasing! Well done, my friend!! Best wishes, Keith
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/16/2012 9:31:00 AM
thanks Keith,keeping you entertained is a great feeling
Date: 7/13/2012 7:24:00 PM
Great work!-Pat
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/16/2012 9:29:00 AM
thanks Patrick
Date: 7/12/2012 9:08:00 PM
Hello, Richard I'm wondering if my spirit will be happy when it leaves this island it lives in. Many thoughts here, are not easy.. one can not really prepare for such an event... xox~pd
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/13/2012 12:48:00 PM
thank you PD
Date: 7/12/2012 8:31:00 PM
another great poem Richard
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/13/2012 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Lisa
Date: 7/12/2012 6:56:00 PM
a lot of relative questions!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/13/2012 12:47:00 PM
YEP,THANKS sITUATION
Date: 7/12/2012 5:13:00 PM
Richard, this a very powerful poem. Are we ready for the coming of the Lord, or are we tied down to this world and the possessions this world can buy? What will others want to say about our lives after we are gone?
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/13/2012 12:46:00 PM
SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT,THANKS PEGGY
Date: 7/12/2012 9:20:00 AM
powerful image, richard--the universality of death lends meaning your unique sense of soulful reflection... nicely done!..:) huggs!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/12/2012 10:48:00 AM
thank you very much Nette
Date: 7/12/2012 8:22:00 AM
Wow, this makes you think. But I am sure you would be missed and you are loved. so there would be no reason for anyone to have negative thoughts. It is the celebration of the life you did have. For you my friend I am sure you would be remembered for your love of everthing.xoxo laurel
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/12/2012 10:47:00 AM
I think so too,thanks much Laurel
Date: 7/12/2012 7:54:00 AM
great advice - love your musings :) btw, this is not tail rhyme, prob. just rhyme, but tail rhyme is a fun form you should try, if you like short poems
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/12/2012 8:08:00 AM
thanks B.E.S,for both the comment and correction,still learning lol
Date: 7/12/2012 12:45:00 AM
wow..i like what u wrote very insightful..nice..=)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/12/2012 6:27:00 AM
thanks alot Tricia
Date: 7/11/2012 9:00:00 PM
ooo I like this one. beautifully written. =)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/11/2012 9:25:00 PM
thank you very much Brandi
Date: 7/11/2012 8:23:00 PM
With the love you have in your heart Richard...I can tell you..Don't worry about any of those bad things.Your words,love,and heart shall travel on,and,on.Words of beauty my friend..
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/11/2012 9:27:00 PM
thanks Dan,true friends
Date: 7/11/2012 2:43:00 PM
"Yuh a go insperation ti di world RICHIE; fi a sure yuh, mi whe cry,cry,cry!! FA FI WHE DIE IN Yah Place.... A go friend whe Fly above yah MI ANGEL. Tis yuh who has given comfort ti yuh children, fi they are di ones whe do live for ti di end RICHIE. Nuff love babz......
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/11/2012 9:29:00 PM
thanks Carma nuff luv
Date: 7/11/2012 2:32:00 PM
wow. I think i just found one of my answers that iv never asked anyone. Beautiful read :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/11/2012 9:31:00 PM
thanks Brittany,happy you visited and found some answers oxox
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