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When I Close My Eyes

When I, close my eyes, you are all I see. The, thought of you will never leave my mind. For you, are the one who set my soul free. With, love so amazing, it should be enshrined. The, thought of you will never leave my mind. Without you, my heart will cease to exist. With, love so amazing, it should be enshrined. I knew, it was so from when we first kissed. Without you, my heart will cease to exist. And, with you my life, will always be complete. I knew, it was so from when we first kissed. These feelings, will always be made indiscreet. And, with you my life, will always be complete. For you, are the one who set my soul free. These feelings, will always be made indiscreet. Because, when I close my eyes, you're all I see. 5/31/2017

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Date: 6/29/2017 6:02:00 PM
This is very beautiful, Jeremy:) Great writing!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/29/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel :) Pantoums are a bit harder!
Date: 5/31/2017 8:17:00 PM
Hello Jeremy, I have just finished reading your poetry. Wow! I like this love poem. Yes love poem, that is how I read it. You did well on this poem.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/31/2017 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene :) Yes it is a love poem :)

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