When I Close My Eyes

How I long for you beloved, 
That lustful gaze in your eyes
The way your hands like silk ties
Wrap themselves around my thighs...

Your soft warm lips
Upon My breasts
That trace of smouldering heat
Along my spine...

Hips swaying to and fro
Gazing at the paling moonlight
Our bodies blissfully entwined
And there, in the midst of ecstasy
Echoing through space and time
Are memories of you ...
In me, still so alive

When distance denies
And I can't touch your beautiful face
I close my eyes in delirious state
And it's in those secret, endearing moments
I realize why my love for you never dies...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 3:49 PM
- Thanks for all the beautiful poems you have shared with me this year, Maddie - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 7, 2013 at 5:26 PM
very romantic and moving poem
Barton Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 1:05 PM
thank you ;)
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November 16, 2013 at 11:23 PM
Madeline, wow.. Now this sure holds more than secret longing moments. A beautiful love stored in the back of the mind. It's amazing how one can leave the penetrating passion needing behind...that drives the mind wild, i would agree... xox~ LINDA
Dua Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:48 AM
Enjoyed stopping by reading this lovely piece of yours !! This poem expresses true love ! Love the way you have combined the words and made a lovely poetry ! .....Saanvi
Barton Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Thank you for reading my poetry-Maddie
Situation Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 10:08 PM
You return the love I gave.
Barton Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:33 AM
You'll have it again someday just don't stop searching friend -Maddie
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 9:11 AM
- Thank you, Madelin ... this is music to my ears .... beautiful & sweet from your heart. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Barton Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 7:05 PM
thank you so much Anne Lise `Maddie
Carroll Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 8:56 AM
Hi Madelin, A very romantic and sensual write..I liked this one.. Ken
Barton Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Thank you Ken, always appreciate kind words the positive feedback~Maddie
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September 19, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Ecstasy!
Barton Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 7:27 PM
ecstasy is right my friend Love does that to you Thank you~Maddie
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September 18, 2013 at 10:44 PM
What a beautiful and powerful poem! I love it, great lines, well penned poem! Madelin! :) xoxo
Barton Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 11:03 PM
thank you Cris thank God for a sound memory and vivid imagery cause when your loving someone at a painful distance it's all you got :)
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