When I Close My Eyes

How I long for you beloved, 
That lustful gaze in your eyes
The way your hands like silk ties
Wrap themselves around my thighs...

Your soft warm lips
Upon My breasts
That trace of smouldering heat
Along my spine...

Hips swaying to and fro
Gazing at the paling moonlight
Our bodies blissfully entwined
And there, in the midst of ecstasy
Echoing through space and time
Are memories of you ...
In me, still so alive

When distance denies
And I can't touch your beautiful face
I close my eyes in delirious state
And it's in those secret, endearing moments
I realize why my love for you never dies...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/17/2013 3:49:00 PM
- Thanks for all the beautiful poems you have shared with me this year, Maddie - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2013 5:26:00 PM
very romantic and moving poem
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Madelin Barton
Date: 2/21/2014 1:05:00 PM
thank you ;)
Date: 11/16/2013 11:23:00 PM
Madeline, wow.. Now this sure holds more than secret longing moments. A beautiful love stored in the back of the mind. It's amazing how one can leave the penetrating passion needing behind...that drives the mind wild, i would agree... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:48:00 AM
Enjoyed stopping by reading this lovely piece of yours !! This poem expresses true love ! Love the way you have combined the words and made a lovely poetry ! .....Saanvi
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Madelin Barton
Date: 5/27/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poetry-Maddie
Date: 10/19/2013 10:08:00 PM
You return the love I gave.
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Madelin Barton
Date: 5/27/2014 10:33:00 AM
You'll have it again someday just don't stop searching friend -Maddie
Date: 10/13/2013 9:11:00 AM
- Thank you, Madelin ... this is music to my ears .... beautiful & sweet from your heart. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Madelin Barton
Date: 10/14/2013 7:05:00 PM
thank you so much Anne Lise `Maddie
Date: 9/20/2013 8:56:00 AM
Hi Madelin, A very romantic and sensual write..I liked this one.. Ken
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Madelin Barton
Date: 9/20/2013 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Ken, always appreciate kind words the positive feedback~Maddie
Date: 9/19/2013 5:13:00 PM
Ecstasy!
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Madelin Barton
Date: 9/19/2013 7:27:00 PM
ecstasy is right my friend Love does that to you Thank you~Maddie
Date: 9/18/2013 10:44:00 PM
What a beautiful and powerful poem! I love it, great lines, well penned poem! Madelin! :) xoxo
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Madelin Barton
Date: 9/18/2013 11:03:00 PM
thank you Cris thank God for a sound memory and vivid imagery cause when your loving someone at a painful distance it's all you got :)
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