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When I Awake

When I awake When I awake The same as you Our time of life My desires are few When you awake The same as me Nothing new Sleep in the eyes Bright and bushy tailed Tensions and sugar plums Side by side Are we one Are we two A lifetime The same as you

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Date: 8/23/2024 9:31:00 PM
Nice rhyme and story in a prayer-like poem. Well done.
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Wilbert Webb
Date: 8/24/2024 4:04:00 AM
Hilda: I am sharing, with what is to come. The clock wears on the gears for all... Not just some

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