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When I Am Alone

Storming through the day with joy and laughter solitude and bliss But they are not what I feel when I am alone When I am Alone the cold rattles and pains my joints This immobilizes me to my cheap twin spring mattress Although the sun rips through my window I see no brightness Only darkness and gloom When I am alone my thoughts are as clear as distilled vodka My mind guzzles and drowns in a sea of insecurity I think of no hope and no bliss

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Date: 5/6/2013 8:42:00 AM
Sad, yet relating for many. This is a gripping piece. Well done!
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Delli Thami
Date: 5/8/2013 10:02:00 PM
thank you very much !