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When He's Alone

HE'S THE LIFE OF THE PARTY SOMETHING ELSE TO SEE, A NORMAL PERSON LIKE YOU OR ME, BUT HE o HAS A BROKEN HEART, IT HAS BEEN TORN IN TWO, THOUGH YOU o COULD NEVER o TELL IT, FOR HE HE ACTS LIKE ME OR YOU. TO LOOK AT o HIM YOU'D NEVER GUESS HIS WORLD WAS TORN APART HIS SMILE DISPLAYED, TRIES TO o DENY HE HAS A BROKEN HEART LOOK A LITTLE DEEPER AND YOU'LL FIND WHAT'S HIDDEN THERE MUCH MORE PAIN AND SORROW THAN YOU'LL FIND ANYWHERE HE WAILS AND MOANS WHEN HE'S ALONE IT'S A TROUBLIED SADNESS DOWN INSIDE. WHEN HE'S ALONE HE CRIES

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Date: 10/27/2018 9:29:00 PM
I swear your talking bout me. Nice work sir
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/28/2018 11:13:00 PM
Thank you Jay. I appreciate that!........pat
Date: 10/23/2018 7:09:00 PM
Pat...this is fabulous. Don't be concerned that to you, it looks scattered. Mine does the same if you view it on a small screen like a cell phone. You just have to view it on a laptop. I left you a soup mail. Very awesome concrete! Kudos!
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Pat Adams
Date: 10/23/2018 9:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments and help. This was so hard I don't know if I'll try again, because I don't think I'm artistic enough to make it really look good. But it was fun trying though!!...........pat
Date: 10/13/2018 1:57:00 PM
Beautiful verse. Pat, and the picture you created - both literally and figuratively - just amazing!
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Date: 10/13/2018 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Michelle. What a sweet thing to say! (Or write?!) My first concrete effort I thought was a little clunky. At first I didn't have returns on all the lines and when I submitted it, it flew apart. Oh well, a learning experience for sure!...................80)

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