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When Heavens Cry

Thunder kaboomed through the lightning streaking sky, Raindrops splattered by, The earth lapped up each drop like a dry desert, Puddles formed in dirt, Dripping leaves drip dripped their assent to freshness, Spreading out lushness, Children splash-jumped their way across the wet road, To their own abode, The heavens did cry, No spot was left dry, Thunder kaboomed through the lightning streaking sky. 11/20/18 Half-Eleven poetry contest Sponsored by Nina Parmenter

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Date: 12/3/2018 3:46:00 PM
I love the use of the word kaboomed Jo itreally adds to the vivid description of the weather, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2018 1:47:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem, Jo. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/21/2018 11:51:00 AM
Nicely depicted Jo..GL in the contest..
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Date: 11/21/2018 7:54:00 AM
nice one Jo, fine penning with lovely rhyme too. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 11/20/2018 4:23:00 PM
this write reflects the sensitivity of your spirit, jo... nice to read you again..huggs
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Date: 11/20/2018 8:32:00 AM
Great one Jo! :) Good luck in the contest .
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