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When He Sleeps

When he sleeps I drink him in. Not for too long in case I'm caught staring. His lips are soft and very enchanting, it takes all my might not to start pouncing. His sculpture is strongly defined, sprinkled with scars showing he never hides. complimented by his beard which is perfectly trim, his nostrils play gently, flaring out and in. His hair trophies his younger years, the parties, the fights, the love, the hurt. Which have all made my love stand proud on this earth. His eyes flicker, he frown as his mind travels through unwanted ground. I hear him groan in pain and fear but stroke his head until he's peacefully clear. As he sleeps I drink him in until the time comes for him to awaken again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/3/2018 12:26:00 PM
Hi all, Thank you for reading. It's my first go and I didn't intend to share so I'm thrilled you looked. Have a good day. Katie
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Date: 4/2/2018 3:16:00 PM
Sweet tasting love...You've got the drink...All the best Katie
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Katie Cumberbatch
Date: 4/3/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading it and commenting. It's my first go at poetry which I'm sure you can tell. I wrote it when me and my husband travelled home by train and he fell asleep.

Book: Shattered Sighs