Nette Onclaud Poet Limerick

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When Frost Sinks Deep

When a mound of frost ruined car’s wire

The iced frost drenched a winter’s attire

My  jacket, this frost all stripped--

Butt naked as frost unzipped

Pants off I gasped, frost sunk in the mire!



Same Word Winter Limerick 
Charles Messina's Contest    1/09/2019

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Eve Roper January 18, 2019 at 9:25 PM Nette, awesome well written with great imagery limerick. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Alexis Y. January 15, 2019 at 6:22 AM Hi Nette, I'm just coming back to say congratulations your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Tania Kitchin January 15, 2019 at 4:28 AM Ha ha, very cute, congratulations on your win in the contest!

Charles Messina January 14, 2019 at 10:21 PM LOL, this is too funny, Nette. Well done on this new form...Love it! Great pic too! Congratulations on your 1st place win...hugs // Charlie

Anisha Dutta January 11, 2019 at 9:07 PM Well chosen word 'Frost'. All the Best.

Sara Kendrick January 11, 2019 at 4:31 PM Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Alexis Y. January 11, 2019 at 4:22 AM Lol! Nette, You rose to the challenge to write a "same word" limerick. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Just thinking about the whole thing makes me want " shiver" .I wish the of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Brandy Nicole January 9, 2019 at 9:52 PM Soft giggle. :) That's what you call- being caught with your pants down. Yikes!! This is cute and clever. Thank you for making me smile. ~ Brandy

Bobby May January 9, 2019 at 2:52 PM Excellent and cute Nette, looks very cold to be butt naked though. lol

Vijay Pandit January 9, 2019 at 2:20 PM Photo makes the point..elevated by your poem. Well done, Nette.

John Gondolf January 9, 2019 at 2:06 PM Cute limerick, Nette, that sounds like a very precarious situation, better put your pants on before you get frostbite... haha All my best. John

Valerie Staton January 9, 2019 at 1:54 PM Very nice poem!

Tom Cunningham January 9, 2019 at 1:46 PM Haha brrrrr I can feel that cold. Well written Nette. Tom.