When Frost Sinks Deep

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When a mound of frost ruined car’s wire The iced frost drenched a winter’s attire My jacket, this frost all stripped-- Butt naked as frost unzipped Pants off I gasped, frost sunk in the mire! Same Word Winter Limerick Charles Messina's Contest 1/09/2019

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/18/2019 9:25:00 PM

Nette, awesome well written with great imagery limerick. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/15/2019 6:22:00 AM

Hi Nette, I'm just coming back to say congratulations your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2019 4:28:00 AM

Ha ha, very cute, congratulations on your win in the contest!

Charles Messina

Date: 1/14/2019 10:21:00 PM

LOL, this is too funny, Nette. Well done on this new form...Love it! Great pic too! Congratulations on your 1st place win...hugs // Charlie

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/11/2019 9:07:00 PM

Well chosen word 'Frost'. All the Best.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2019 4:31:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/11/2019 4:22:00 AM

Lol! Nette, You rose to the challenge to write a "same word" limerick. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Just thinking about the whole thing makes me want " shiver" .I wish the of luck in the contest:-) Alexis