When Flowers Die

When flowers die, 
they die slowly-
edge by edge 
the petals curl,
still, silently, 
without complaint....

Unlike us,
cut flowers 
should be let go before 
the first tinge of death 
while they are yet 
radiant in deepest color.

We humans, however, 
must stay alive long,
long past our first bloom--
till we have crinkled and 
brutishly browned from 
the excesses of time.

Yet we have 
what flowers have not: 
our love for them 
dies with them 
while our love 
for our beloved blooms
ever more resplendent 
with the long years, 
lasting past the fading, 
lasting past even death itself....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Peck Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 12:48 PM
A beautiful poem. And, yes--we definitely crinkle and brown :) I loved your last two lines especially. Congratulations on your win!
Carber Avatar
April 30, 2022 at 9:53 AM
Thanks Ann--forgive me delay, had some dental work--ugh!
Gaul Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 4:54 PM
LJ, the essence of real poetry is to have a unique viewpoint. You do it here. This type of work should be exhalted. A tinge of life wisdom often colors the edges as you nicely point out. Congrats on this breakthrough piece.
Carber Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Ah Greg, you're makin' this old poet blush! Thank you so much!
Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 10:23 AM
LJ - wonderful metaphoric write. So true, love does not die and lasts "even" past "death itself." There is profound truth and wisdom in your lines. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
Carber Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Ah yes, God's greatest gift I suspect...
Radice Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 4:02 AM
Hi L. J. Before I started writing my comments about your great poem I read through everyone's comments before me. Not to sound too lazy, but I can't think of anything more to add. It's all been said already. The word 'entwining' has been written - that's a great way to describe exactly what you have done here with the themes. Congratulations.Cheers - Gary
Carber Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 7:07 AM
Thanks Gary-- I'm glad the poem resonated with you--every poet's dream.
Alex Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 7:28 PM
Great observation of flowers; Comparison and contrasting of flowers and humans. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, C.A.!!!
Legros Kelley Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 6:03 PM
This is exquisite L.J. Thank you for your submission of this amazing poem. Congratulations on your first-place win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest! :) <3 ~BJ
Puddifoot Avatar
March 15, 2020 at 11:51 AM
a thoughtful and very well written piece, i enjoyed reading it - congrats on your win!
Carber Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Thank you Charlotte [and I love your surname! Origin in England perchance?]
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 8:17 AM
Wonderful penning L.J.! Congratulations for your win :), xomo
Carber Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 8:07 AM
Thank you, Maureen!
Webster Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Truly wonderful! The juxtaposition of images to explore poetic content is really effectively done.
Carber Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Thanks Jack!
Watt Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:56 PM
LJ, I like where you took this theme, comparing ephemeral flowers to the permanent love we hold in our hearts for our loved ones. Great writing, and congrats on your win! ~ John
Carber Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, John --appreciate it!
Kauffman Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 4:24 PM
Hi LJ, Wisdom intertwined in poetic lines. Wonderful comparison to flowers - wonderful metaphor. Congratulations and kudos my friend.
Carber Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Sam, thanks!
Kauffman Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 10:14 PM
Hi L.J. This poem speaks truth that not many have ever even thought about or expressed with such outright simplicity! Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Yes it does!
Carber Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Thanks Sam--my wife is always telling me I'm simple-minded, but sometimes it pays off!
Ibeh Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 4:05 PM
Beautifully penned, L.J. Really enjoyed it. Congrats!
Carber Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Chiri Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Here to congratulate you a great win!;)
Carber Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Thanks Brenda!
Mcgee Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 9:42 PM
What an insightful poem you have penned. Congratulations on your win.
Carber Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 10:44 AM
Thank you, Jeanne-- much appreciated!
Ashley Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 7:36 PM
Your poem is as profound in its deep introspection as it is in its deep beauty, L. J., and each deepens with every read. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Carber Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Susan--it is always a pleasure to hear from you.
Gauthier Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 11:19 PM
Congrats on your top win, LJ. Well penned.
Carber Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 11:24 AM
Thank you Line
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Truth shines from your expressive words L.J. Congratulations on your deserving first place win! : ) xxoo
Carber Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 11:25 AM
Thanks Connie-- truth is a hard thing to nail down-- maybe less so for us poets than for the politicians!
A  Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Len C, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
Carber Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Thank you Skat!
A   Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:56 PM
Len, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
Carber Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Thanks Linda, and sorry about the delayed reply-- had a health scare that's fortunately been resolved.
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 12:03 AM
Len, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~
Richards Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 2:57 PM
So lovely, and rather sad at the same time !! I love the personalization you have given a simple bloom ! Well done!
Roper Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:45 PM
Congratulations on your win, Len . A 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
Gibson Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Beautifully written, Len. I am so enjoying reading this winners' list. Congratulations on your win.
Deschler Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 6:02 PM
If we love and remember someone, then they never really die... This poem is beautiful and soulful. Very nicely written, Len! Congrats on the win!
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