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When First We Met

When first I set eyes On that long brown hair and thoose slender thighs. Darlin I have to admit. It did more than make my blood pressure rise. I said hey baby can I buy you a drink. you ordered a bottle of jack. Killed it in two swallows seems I've met my match i do think. Some jelouse guy made the mistake of callin you a whore. Befor i could do a thing. You sprang into action and introduced his face to the floor. We left that place was a night i could not forget. Still got that tattoo and permanet scar when first we met. It was like something outta a perverse fable. I finally found a woman who could drink me under the table. You she kissed my lips and blacked my eye. Said your a total scumbag jerk. And just my kinda guy. Everyone said it wont last a week you wanna bet? For it's been ten years and many felonies since when first we met.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/16/2009 1:04:00 PM
Whooooo.danggg,thats good..and funny.Nice:)
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:09:00 PM
There is that bar room humor of yours again John, this is halirous with a bit of your charm.
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Date: 5/21/2009 6:28:00 PM
Wickedly funny, John! (Many felonies since when first we met - LOL) I do have to admire this woman's spunk. Very creative poem that's a delight to read! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2009 3:48:00 PM
nicely penned-charma
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Date: 5/21/2009 2:09:00 PM
I like this..good write!
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Date: 5/21/2009 1:40:00 PM
I love the style nice write.
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