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When Fire Glows

The minty wood smoke beckons me As a thirst of love’s rhapsody Burns fireplace Where hours unfold a night’s craving Like glittered strokes upon the wing Of fireflies And time’s fervor awash in glow Heightens couple- play, to bestow Sky’s fireworks. Earth, Fire, Wind of nette onclaud Zelene Desha 11.17.2014 Fire

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Date: 11/28/2014 10:02:00 AM
Wow! Love this. Congratulations on a great write and win.
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Date: 11/27/2014 11:24:00 AM
Fiery and passionate! Congrats on a wonderful win! Happy Thanksgiving...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:40:00 AM
great way to relate all images romantically. Congrat!!
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Date: 11/26/2014 6:00:00 AM
your words and images are aflame, zelene!.. thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your fine win!
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Date: 11/26/2014 12:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Zelene!
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Date: 11/25/2014 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2014 6:49:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/25/2014 4:23:00 PM
Oh yes Zelene. I see why Nette placed this poem so high. It's beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2014 4:04:00 PM
Nice work Zelene..Enjoy your big win. BG
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Date: 11/25/2014 2:52:00 PM
beautifully penned:-) hugs jan xx
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