When Fire Glows

The minty wood smoke beckons me
As a thirst of love’s rhapsody
Burns fireplace

Where hours unfold a night’s craving
Like glittered strokes upon the wing
Of fireflies

And time’s fervor awash in glow
Heightens couple- play, to bestow
Sky’s fireworks.


Earth, Fire, Wind of nette onclaud
Zelene Desha 11.17.2014
Fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Wow! Love this. Congratulations on a great write and win.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Fiery and passionate! Congrats on a wonderful win! Happy Thanksgiving...hugs, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 9:40 AM
great way to relate all images romantically. Congrat!!
Onclaud Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 6:00 AM
your words and images are aflame, zelene!.. thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your fine win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 12:31 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Zelene!
Yvonne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 6:49 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Oh yes Zelene. I see why Nette placed this poem so high. It's beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
Gorelick Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Nice work Zelene..Enjoy your big win. BG
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:52 PM
beautifully penned:-) hugs jan xx
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