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poem inspired by this painting of Count Issepo da Porto and his son Adriano by Paul Véronèse (1555)

poem written for online poetry class

WHEN FATHER STANDS NEAR

He stands beside his child  
the way a tree stands beside its shadow~  
not owning it,  
not shaping it,  
but offering a place to grow  
in the shelter of his presence.  

The boy leans in,  
trust quiet as breath,  
as if he already knows  
that the world is easier to face  
when a father’s steadiness  
is close enough to touch.  

There is no need for words.  
Love moves in the small distances~  
the space between two hands,  
the tilt of a shoulder,  
the soft gravity that pulls  
one life toward another.  

On Father's Day
what matters most
is not the weight of legacy  
or the echo of a family name,  
but the simple truth  
that a child stands taller~ 
when a father stands near.
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June 21, 2026 at 11:21 PM
What a lovely and soul hitting truth. If a father stays close by, a child feels so secure. How beautifully you have written this poem in simple words without pompous demonstrations. A lovely tribute to fathers on Father's Day. This goes straight into my FAVE.
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June 21, 2026 at 11:02 AM
Your poem is a poignant reflection on the personal experience with your father. I really like the conclusion: a child stands taller~when a father stands near.
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