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When Dynamite Was Legal

Fourth of July and dynamite Major bang for your night Half stick, whole stick One stick, two sticks did the trick Blew the stump sky high and in a hover Sent those men running under cover God protected those pyrotechies The rumble was felt all over the counties . /***\ . \\\\stump///// ^^ l . /pow!!\

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Judy Ball

Date: 7/17/2011 2:20:00 PM

Yeah butr we had fun and celebrated with a BANG! ;) Good job my friend. God Bless, JB

Don Johnson

Date: 7/6/2011 3:34:00 PM

ehheheh, duck 4 cover , heres another, watch out for the blast....great entertainment here...xo, Don

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/6/2011 8:54:00 AM

A big bang for the fourth Doris, a happy verse well written.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/6/2011 7:45:00 AM

This is funny and cute. A time gone by when people were not protected by law from blowing themselves up. God Bless, JB

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/5/2011 4:05:00 AM

An entertaining write. Hope you had a great 4th July!

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2011 1:06:00 AM

Wow!!! This writing is DYNAMITE! Doris. Lainie

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/4/2011 6:51:00 PM

hello, sorry to say your a little too late with this prayer. I learned that my cousin that i work for lost two fingers playing with fireworks. that was day before yesterday. but thank you for the prayer. john

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 7/4/2011 6:45:00 PM

Happy 4th my sweet friend I hope you and the family are keeping well?

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 7/4/2011 2:20:00 PM

bang bang! good stuff

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2011 12:20:00 AM

this is a really fun one for the holiday, and I hope more people stop by and see it! POW!