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When Did You Surrender

Was it Greed Was it Lust Was it Power Was it Fear Is there a point of No Return Or do You choose Your Evil Daily What drives You Is it that You just don't care Is it that it all doesn't matter How do you justify Your Bitter End....... Have Your Eyes lost their Soul Deep beyond recesses of Light Why did You not turn back Wasn't the dark ....hollow in it's core Lost are these Souls.....Who Love No More.... For All Who Heed....... Never Surrender Your Soul....... Unto the Lord......I Commend My Spirit......

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Date: 2/2/2016 10:36:00 PM
Great dramatic verse, Ninette! Written with conviction! I really liked this :)
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