Hendri Schreuder Poet Free verse

When Did You Start To Hate Me So

When did you start to hate me so?
When you crushed my heart and thought that was ok.
                                     I don’t know what to say.
That’s alright. You've said nothing enough already.
                             Is there anything I can do?
No.             You’ve done nothing long enough.
                 
You’re hurting me.
You hurt me.
I’m Sorry.
So am I.
Please.

When did you start to hate me so?
When you crushed my heart and still called me your best friend...

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Beata Agustin March 11, 2025 at 2:26 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.

Skat A January 19, 2016 at 7:32 PM AWESOME VERSE... DEEP...SKAT

Lin Lane January 10, 2016 at 8:05 AM It's heartbreaking when a relationship goes wrong. A nice free verse poem, Hendri. Hendri Schreuder January 10, 2016 at 8:09 AM Thanks so much Lin, appreciate it.