When Daddy Did the Cooking

My brother was first at the table
to pile six pancakes on his plate.
I don’t know how he stayed so skinny
given the enormous amount that he ate.
My daddy had made the hot syrup
from white sugar or so he had thought.
After one bite my brother was choking,
hair rising as though he’s besot.
Then Dad yelled ,”Don’t pour the syrup. 
Instead of sugar, I grabbed Epsom Salt. "


Won No. 5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/9/2016 8:52:00 AM
Congrats Joyce, for your placement with this really funny piece!! ;-)
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:36:00 PM
I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Joyce
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Date: 8/22/2011 1:23:00 AM
Great win Cousin here, epsom salts can burn the rear:) love the poem babe, xo, Don
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Date: 8/22/2011 1:14:00 AM
i'm sold, joyce! ouuta sight.. . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:58:00 PM
sounds like a good way to get cleaned out! Congrats to you Joyce
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:46:00 PM
Lots of things go hay-wire when dad does the cooking Joyce. thanks for you worthy poem entry. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/21/2011 5:17:00 PM
hey Joyce congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/21/2011 5:14:00 PM
Good one Joyce and congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:31:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on another amazing win with this witty write from the photo my friend... superbly fun filled...luv..
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:45:00 PM
Ha! So funny and probably true. Reminds me of a similar incident in our household. Good job.
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Date: 8/13/2011 4:39:00 PM
Wanted to read a couple of of yours before I get bounced off - so glad I did! LOL, love this witty one! Hope you're having a great weekend, Joyce
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:19:00 PM
hahaha, funny one Joyce, much enjoyed
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Date: 8/13/2011 11:13:00 AM
Reads like some cooking done by someone I know..Good luck if for a contest..Reads like a winner..I hope that the rest of the pancakes were not ruined..Sara
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Date: 8/13/2011 7:57:00 AM
Thanks for posting, I love light poetry.
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:13:00 AM
I love the Joyce very humorous....well written... i needed that laugh....thanks....smiles......chiquita
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