When Daddy Did the Cooking

My brother was first at the table
to pile six pancakes on his plate.
I don’t know how he stayed so skinny
given the enormous amount that he ate.
My daddy had made the hot syrup
from white sugar or so he had thought.
After one bite my brother was choking,
hair rising as though he’s besot.
Then Dad yelled ,”Don’t pour the syrup. 
Instead of sugar, I grabbed Epsom Salt. "


Won No. 5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kimathi Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Congrats Joyce, for your placement with this really funny piece!! ;-)
Horne Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 12:36 PM
I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )
Brown Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Joyce
Johnson Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 1:23 AM
Great win Cousin here, epsom salts can burn the rear:) love the poem babe, xo, Don
Onclaud Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 1:14 AM
i'm sold, joyce! ouuta sight.. . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!
Dufresne Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 9:58 PM
sounds like a good way to get cleaned out! Congrats to you Joyce
Freeman Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Lots of things go hay-wire when dad does the cooking Joyce. thanks for you worthy poem entry. Agape, Moses
Williams Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 5:17 PM
hey Joyce congrats on your win David
Arowolo Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Good one Joyce and congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Congrats Joyce on another amazing win with this witty write from the photo my friend... superbly fun filled...luv..
Mossburg Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Ha! So funny and probably true. Reminds me of a similar incident in our household. Good job.
Horne Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Wanted to read a couple of of yours before I get bounced off - so glad I did! LOL, love this witty one! Hope you're having a great weekend, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 1:19 PM
hahaha, funny one Joyce, much enjoyed
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Reads like some cooking done by someone I know..Good luck if for a contest..Reads like a winner..I hope that the rest of the pancakes were not ruined..Sara
T Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Thanks for posting, I love light poetry.
Baity Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 12:13 AM
I love the Joyce very humorous....well written... i needed that laugh....thanks....smiles......chiquita
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