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As the least of good intentions slept, the dreams of all the Angels wept. When from men’s hearts forgiveness lept, the souls of all the Angels wept. When brooms of evil sadly swept, the songs from all the Angels wept. When over truth false prophets crept, the face of all the Angels wept. From lost promises of faith not kept, the eyes of all the Angels wept. Even The Angels Wept Contest 05/02/2016 Sponsored by John Lawless

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Date: 5/3/2016 3:29:00 PM
Great monorrhyme here, Charlie. A nice entry for John's contest
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Date: 5/3/2016 6:43:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I misidentified the form. I'm glad you didn't. Details don't seem to be my long suit...You're a dear, thanks again, Charlie
Date: 5/3/2016 3:24:00 PM
Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thank you beautiful friend...
Date: 5/3/2016 2:44:00 PM
This along with your picture is a very visual write! Seen and felt! The best to you in this contest!
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thank You Walter...
Date: 5/3/2016 1:49:00 PM
- A heartbreaking crying - Lovely written, Charlie - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thank You Anne-Lise...
Date: 5/3/2016 12:37:00 PM
Very well written...and I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Meenakshi...
Date: 5/3/2016 11:49:00 AM
Nice poem.
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Aa...

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