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When and Why

I am faulty in all my ways Made of the worst kind of stuff I am broken and built to spill And all my edges rough I am torn and ragged My warrenty expired I have jagged edges I am bent and tired I have chips of paint Long ago forgotton My hinges creak and groan And my foundation rotten I am not fixable Not that you would try But when you look at me Perhaps ask when and why

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Date: 3/12/2016 11:07:00 AM
Jesse, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Book: Shattered Sighs