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When all was quiet

she looked up
cracking a little smile
her eyes far into the distance
and thoughts reaching out beyond
like all she needed were the memories



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:29 PM
deeply touching and evocative poem. Loved it, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:24 AM
Thank you very much, Sara ~ have a lovely day
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 8:33 AM
A truly lovely piece.
Gauthier Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit, Richard ~
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