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when all is quiet with the world in my head chimes an enchanted choir angelic mermaids as cellists and harpists in a distant dreamy background of surreal peaceful harmony and I wonder how difficult it would be to cross over to that realm where there’s no hungry vicious predators no sadistic callous cruelty no senseless injustice unlike anywhere we know is it so terribly ludicrous to believe in a heaven where there is only unsullied edenic love AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on September 30, 2019

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Date: 10/2/2019 5:11:00 PM
It is not ludicrous to consider that place. Scripture has promised this over many centuries by many different authors. This awaits us. Just don't be in a hurry to leave us. You mean a great deal to a lot of people. <3
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Date: 10/2/2019 7:52:00 PM
I can't afford to be in a hurry. I have projects to complete first. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/1/2019 9:12:00 AM
only light and love....exactly, so true. Beautiful, so much said in such few words. :)-luloo
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Date: 10/1/2019 9:38:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Lu Loo.
Date: 10/1/2019 12:08:00 AM
Beautiful.The answer is in your poem to reach heaven and to be with peace.Have a great time!
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Date: 10/1/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kenisha.
Date: 9/30/2019 11:53:00 PM
I believe... God bless you always
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Date: 10/1/2019 7:36:00 AM
Life is more beautiful when we believe!
Date: 9/30/2019 11:32:00 PM
You see, you were already there...
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Date: 10/1/2019 7:36:00 AM
Hello There. Thanks.

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