When All Hallow's Evening Is Always

In the evening “All Hallow” when folks have their fun,
doing things such as losing themselves in a maze,
there are some in a labyrinth coming undone.
They’re the world’s many victims who don’t see bright days.
Every night for lost souls is their own horror show.
While most kids trick-or treat door to door for some sweets,
there are some not so lucky; to bedrooms they go
being forced to turn tricks but collecting no treats.
People love haunted houses when monsters they see,
but the children of misery live day and night
seeing monsters from whom they’re unable to flee.
We might love being scared, but they’re dying from fright,
for they’re ghosts of the houses that they’re living in,
where unseen by the world, they serve those who love sin.

Oct. 31, 2022
for the All Hallows' Evening Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Peck Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Andrea, what a wonderful poem--thinking of those with no joy in their lives. How very thoughtful your poem is. Congratulations!
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November 18, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Yours is a poem of contrasts, Andrea. We are left feeling sorry for those who suffer abuse; theirs is a life from which * they’re unable to flee.* ~ Congratulations on your podium finish! Regards // paul
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November 17, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win! A very unique look at the "monsters" some children have to live with every way with little or no way of escaping the the dungeons these monsters create! Thank you for this thoughtful write!
Roper Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 5:33 PM
Great write, Congratulations on your win :)
Kibble Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 3:20 PM
Congrats, I like where you took this poem.
Ashley Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 12:05 PM
Dear Andrea, congratulations for your excellent win in Craig's contest. Indeed, for these unfortunate victims of abuse, every day is filled with real monsters. The juxtaposition of real horror with the manufactured horror of Halloween is striking. A timely and affecting piece. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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November 16, 2022 at 6:49 AM
Love where you took this in form and theme Andrea!
Cornish Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 1:11 PM
Never noticed stanzas Andrea, it was totally meter, rhyme, and content and you aced all three of those!
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 12:58 PM
so happy you appreciated what I did with this one. I should have divided it into stanzas but was not sure you would want it that way or not.
Maverick Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 2:57 PM
You might as well look up Vicky Ash s r a Survivor Andrea, have you heard of her ? Her story includes how on the Manufactured halloween thing her Torture level increased.'
Warlov Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 2:13 AM
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Buhagiar Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 12:28 AM
That is quite scary, Andrea. Hugs
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