When a Poem Becomes a Poem

When does a poem first become a poem 
The moments it's read
or the second it's born?
When it takes its first breath
on the page it adorns?
When does a poem first become a poem 

When does a poem first become a poem
When it finds the right rhyme 
no longer feeling alone?
When it sits on the porch
of the old poets home?
When does a poem first become a poem

When does a poem first become a poem
When it takes out the blade
and carves its message in stone? 
Or tears the fabric of time
on the lesser known?
When does a poem first become a poem
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Muideen Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 5:40 AM
Wow! You penned this so well my friend. I enjoyed the read...........A.M.
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November 4, 2016 at 6:00 PM
I really like this, especially the last stanza, imho, at first breath.
Sands Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Nice one Mike. Makes the reader think. I like it. :)
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