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When a Man Loves a Woman

I was less once The day before I met you Before I saw myself through your eyes Before I believed I was worthy of a forever love A completing love I didn't know I didn't understand That I could love someone The way that I love you Moments have turned into years and years feel like moments I feel I can be me and still I want to be more because of you A better man A more giving considerate man My wish for you is to know that I have never stopped seeing you I appreciate the kindness and generosity of your soul You give of yourself each day Your heart is a truly splendid thing Your beauty takes my breath away I still feel shy when you look at me My body still aches with my need of you You are God's greatest and most treasured gift You are the proof that He Loves and knows me Yes, I was less once The day before I met you! Written Sept 4th 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2015 1:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this amazing poem, my friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/16/2015 9:25:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.;0)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/15/2015 3:18:00 PM

Such an amazing tribute to your beloved woman, Richard. I love your poem, and congratulate you for your wonderful win. Sandra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2015 8:58:00 PM

Thanks Sandra, much appreciated.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/15/2015 12:00:00 AM

Wow! Richard this a beautiful declaration of love. To be loved like this is a blessing from up above. Excellent job! Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2015 8:16:00 AM

Indeed it is a blessing. Thanks Alexis.

Skat A

Date: 9/13/2015 10:01:00 PM

this is a wonderful poem Richard, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LOVE SKAT

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2015 8:16:00 AM

Thanks SKAT.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/12/2015 4:51:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Richard! If a man truly sees himself thru his woman's eyes, he surely would know how precious he is!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/12/2015 9:50:00 AM

Thanks Upma, I have such a woman.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/12/2015 4:43:00 AM

Richard great job. Loved your poem. Congratulations on your win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/12/2015 9:50:00 AM

Thanks Michael.

Marjorie Howitt

Date: 9/10/2015 4:07:00 PM

Wow! Now that's how I want to be loved!:-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/11/2015 2:27:00 PM

You deserve no less! Thanks for commenting.

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 9/9/2015 5:39:00 AM

Mr Richard, an awesome piece to true love and being appreciated in love******* Blessings

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2015 8:42:00 AM

Thanks and blessings in return.

Mi Nubilary

Date: 9/8/2015 5:06:00 AM

This soul which you speak of, I congratulate her for the firm she has caused within you Rich! Beautiful dedication.....Ok..enyore arcane...mi

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2015 7:44:00 AM

Thanks MI.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/7/2015 9:34:00 PM

Hi, Richard....just stopping by to tell you....You might want to check the blogs. I have one up. :) Make sure you check it today. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2015 8:03:00 AM

You made my day Eileen!

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/7/2015 7:27:00 AM

Aww...I didn't know that you wrote this until today, and how odd it was that we both had forever love poems in our collection posted only a day apart...that is excellent..this is super sweet..finding the forever love is like finding a gold in a diamond mine..your sweet words make me smile :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2015 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Casarah, I see your poem is a big hit! Well done!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/7/2015 2:01:00 AM

This is the kind of love declaration that sounds and feels real...sincere and all the more romantic because of it. Simply beautiful, Rick. hugs!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2015 8:59:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug back to you.

Emile Pinet

Date: 9/6/2015 5:14:00 PM

Perfect! Well my friend you have surpassed yourself...a pleasant, happy poem filled with love. Emile #7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2015 8:59:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and kind 7.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/6/2015 12:38:00 PM

A deep emotive write, the flow of your write brought to life how much you love your wonderful woman.......a well and an eloquent write....beautiful......A.M.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2015 9:03:00 AM

Thanks my kind friend.:0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2015 11:13:00 PM

Outstanding poetry, Richard. The theme and the way you presented it. I really enjoyed this one and I hope to see it high on the winners' list. I hope to eventually get around to your contest , which sounds so interesting. this poem would make a good one to showcase!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/6/2015 7:43:00 AM

Me too. Thanks Andrea, I hope you give my contest a go.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/5/2015 5:27:00 AM

When God thrives in our hearst, love is forever blooming! Excellent romantic poem! A seven , of course, dear Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2015 8:07:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/4/2015 5:32:00 PM

I was less once, the day before I met you...I love that line Richard. You were truly blessed.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2015 12:22:00 AM

Yes and I am truly thankful. Thanks for the visit Tim.

Mama Bear

Date: 9/4/2015 2:40:00 PM

The way people see you together your love always shines through from both of you to each other You are both truly blessed. Happy Birthday on Monday and see you soon Love Mom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2015 12:23:00 AM

You mean Tuesday *lol*. I love you too mom, we'll see you soon.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/4/2015 8:18:00 AM

Beautiful, personal, touching, heartfelt and loving. What a gift from God and blessing. Exceptional write, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2015 8:20:00 AM

Thanks my friend.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/4/2015 8:18:00 AM

My favorite lines? I still feel shy when you look at me My body still aches with my need of you......that kind of love should never....get old. :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/4/2015 8:17:00 AM

:) What a beautiful tribute to your sweetie....I'm so touched by this piece, Richard....This is what love is meant to be. Your marriage is a testament to enduring love....the God way. Hugs. Soupmail

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2015 8:21:00 AM

I feel blessed beyond what my words can express. Thanks for the thoughtful comment Eileen. Hugs Back.