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When a man loves a woman

When a man loves a woman. I went to the perfumer to make me a scent, to please the woman I love, she is Godsend! He said I will make you a scent no woman has ever wore, and in replace you must give me your soul. I said my soul I don't own, to God it belongs, But instead I will give you my home. Because when a man loves a woman. This is all he needs, first to build her a home in his heart, then whatever she may please!

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Date: 3/30/2013 8:28:00 PM
A very romantic poem which I enjoyed so much this morning my dear friend Ali. Thanks for sharing this gem and your amazing talent. I truly enjoyed your great works this morning. More power and blessings to you always! Happy Easter! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/25/2013 5:34:00 PM
This is true love... where dedication and sacrifice are its tough pillars!! Lovely poem!
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Date: 2/25/2013 11:29:00 PM
Thanks Guru.
Date: 2/25/2013 8:06:00 AM
So romantic!
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Date: 2/25/2013 12:44:00 PM
Romantic is my name :) Thank you Vesna :) xoxoxo
Date: 2/25/2013 7:33:00 AM
- The title made me very curious, Ali ...... - I was not disappointed, it's gorgeous! - Have a nice day - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2013 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Anne. Love, Ali
Date: 2/25/2013 6:30:00 AM
Romantic indeed, dear Ali....she is a lucky woman! :) Lovely write!
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Date: 2/25/2013 7:27:00 AM
Hi Eileen, this is to all the poetry soup women! Always~Ali