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When a House Speaks

at night, in the darkest part of the hour, during the quietest part of the night, my house speaks. painful clanks of plumbing complain of rusty pipes, shifting uneasily in iron skin. walls, old and creaking, move restlessly amongst rotting wood, hiding crevices that whisper forbidden secrets, guardians of things long past, but never forgotten. loud murmurings of possessions lay claim, placing their mark on me, branding me forever. screaming in voices so loud so quarrelsome, so contentious, shouting allegations of neglect, pointing fingers of accusation, condemning, entrapping, creating a cage of deteriorating bars, invisible, but strong, until I close my eyes in frustration, too afraid to sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/2/2016 1:38:00 AM
Debra Bonier, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:04:00 AM
Debra, I like this very much SKAT
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:24:00 PM
Creative and interesting thoughts you have penned so well, Debra
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Debra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:15:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share with luv..
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