When a Blind Man Cries

On a patrol for the good so far from their home Professional in their minds, never to roam But this is a world, where feelings are forgotten Damning souls of destruction fuelled with gun-cotton For on rocky outcrops and deserted sand paths Lie hidden dangers to take life from it's grasp Coalition troops, our children just boys Doing their duty for their orders employ On missions they set out to rid insurgent scum Against a tactic so great, guerrilla warfare hit and run Recent news has informed us, that another has been downed A father, uncle or son, leave another family tear drowned Another hidden device in his face has exploded Their hunger to hate once again has been loaded Medics rush in to save the life of their soul Knowing when he's home, another stat for wars toll Many weeks he recuperates, behind bandages and care Visited by friends, but only his children do stare His strength now regained, but not the man he once was A silence beckons then turns to applause Assisted by comrades as he is led to collect His medal of valour whilst inside he reflects In his future years knowing his children grow strong For he's in a dark world, where he doesn't belong Emotions so many will follow his years For when this blind man cries, we must share in his tears http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-6.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/9/2010 2:08:00 PM
James all the ugliness war represents you have as a focus point in this beautiful and sad write. ~ Wilma
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Date: 10/9/2010 12:35:00 PM
James this is such a powerful write ...i enjoyed as normal you take the reader to a different place sarah x
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Date: 10/9/2010 12:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this emotioally packed work..I am glad that I chose to this one to read today..I was delighted that you stopped by and commented on my work..Have a great week-end..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2010 11:41:00 AM
very touching write and realistic too. It's a shame we have to lose so many good men and women who are fighting for our freedom....take care~Deb
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Date: 10/9/2010 11:39:00 AM
wonderful poem James, about a sad topic all to close to everyone at the moment.
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Date: 10/9/2010 11:20:00 AM
mad ken write , can relate to this in so many ways as once was a royal marine , very good write ...sounds like you were there, respect
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