Wheelie Bin Joe

WHEELIE BIN JOE
On the north side of Brisbane lives a man who does no wrong, 
He pongs a bit, he's grubby and his beard and hair are long, 
He sits upon the footpath mid plastic bags all sorts, 
Black garbage round his shoulders and white ones on for shorts, 
A yuppie down the footpath tripped, 
and soon fell over Joe, 
Recoiled in shock as horror gripped, 
climbed off the "so and so." 
So now they leave him on his throne, 
cross the street to the other side, 
From his house front boards, the nails have flown, 
weather boards have gone to hide. 
The prophet peers from neath his robes, 
bags plastic shuffled flies, 
In trance the seer discards his clothes, 
as fresh plastic he applies, 
Oh he'd tell us all of what he knows,
If he perchance did speak, 
But plastic fumes get up his nose, 
and cause his brain to squeak. 
So if you pass the prophet there, 
do spare a thought for him, 
see his waiscoat's very shiny glare, 
but the plastics getting thin. 
The winter wind it whistles but Joe has cause to grin, 
for the masters call, he's waiting to right some deadly sin. 

Sponsor	Paula Swanson
Contest Name	Do You Know The Cardboard Man?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/5/2011 10:45:00 PM
DON;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/3/2011 5:09:00 PM
Congrats DON on a top notch win with this excellent entry on the cardboard man .. so profound and deep one...xoxo..
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Date: 11/3/2011 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Do You Know The Cardboard Man" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2011 5:33:00 PM
Nicely done Don, speaks many volumes...luv shannon
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Don Johnson
Date: 11/2/2011 5:02:00 PM
Thank you Shannon, keep that lovely poetry coming babe....
Date: 10/24/2011 7:39:00 PM
yep. is what i was tryin' to say. awesome, thanks, namaste~N
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Date: 10/24/2011 12:51:00 PM
Don, Well done my friend. You treat the man with dignity but do not whitewash him. Well done. Tony
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/24/2011 4:36:00 PM
I'm of 2 minds about it Tony, i see all men as equals and i don't want to be a judge either, i feel myself straying too far in this poem...
Date: 10/24/2011 11:25:00 AM
AWESOME, Don. I think this is my favorite of your works. It tugged at my heart to think of "The prophet peering fro m neath his robes." Lots of spiritual meaning behind this incredible rhyme. Suely a winner in Paula'ss contest. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/24/2011 4:41:00 PM
As you would know Carolyn, sometimes the words appear at the right time, I do feel guilty of abusing this poor man, with my dumb poem. Blessings and good health we want for you! Don
Date: 10/24/2011 5:43:00 AM
I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Don. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/24/2011 4:38:00 PM
Good to see the resurrection of the soup, And you Carol, in this group, thanks mate....
Date: 10/24/2011 4:11:00 AM
Fine depiction. Where I live 'wheelie bins' are called 'dumpsters' and he a 'dumpster diver.' if this economy doesn't improve soon a lot of us will live much like Joe.
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/24/2011 5:12:00 AM
world is in a spiral spin, negative needs reversing in, is the fix another bloody war, blood n death of millions more, yes mankind's mortal sin...
Date: 10/24/2011 3:19:00 AM
Very nice!
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