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Wheat Field

She lay down among the verdant wheat listening to swishing overtures, supine, eyes slightly closed; relishing the blue of a spring sky wishing she were the white cloud that appeared out of nowhere... envious of the free spirit she could have been.

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Date: 7/12/2025 9:39:00 AM
A beautiful piece Paul that captures a moment of poignant contemplation. I love it. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 7/6/2025 10:29:00 AM
Wow. That is very fine poetry!
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/7/2025 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea; your feedback is always appreciated. ~ Enjoy the week ahead // paul
Date: 6/22/2025 10:32:00 AM
It’s so sad when someone’s world goes from right to wrong, leavening the feeling in the world one doesn’t belong. A sad though lovely write Paul… Beryl
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/23/2025 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, Beryl for your insightful feedback and for enjoying my humble poem. Best regards // paul
Date: 6/21/2025 9:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 6/21/2025 3:30:00 PM
Thank you for visiting & reading, Paula. Have an enjoyable weekend // paul
Date: 6/21/2025 6:46:00 AM
A beautiful write!
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Date: 6/21/2025 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. I'm still a bit rusty at the moment, but hope to get back into the groove soon :) Ciao // paul

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