Whats You Thinkin Baby B

I have come to the end of my tether today and although you think I’m adorable
Enough is enough put your camera away for what you are doing is deplorable

You promised to take only three or four pics that you want for a memory book
Enough is enough no more coercing, or a black eye you’ll get from my left hook

Hear what I say just look into my eyes; I could be a heavyweight champ
Move in too close you will get a surprise, losing my fuse I’ll kick and I’ll stamp

Inside I'm smiling, a sweet little lad, but if I’m provoked what else can I do
Must nurture a smile without further ado; this look could cause fights to ensue

Peaceful at last no cameras in view, just you and me cuddling like we always do
Cooing and smiling, nothing to fear; it’s all on my face Mum I’d never hurt you



9th January 2019
Competition: Baby Face what’s you THINKIN - Baby B
Sponsor: James Edward Lee Sr
3rd placement

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Date: 4/15/2019 8:58:00 AM
If you are not already, one day you may be a Grandma. Keep taking those pictures so you can 'bore' all your friends, neighbors, relatives, even strangers, by asking the age old question, "Have you seen my grandchildren?" Then you flip out 50 or 100 or more photos and expect them to view every single one with Oooos, Ahhhhs, Oh my goodness, how cute, etc. until you are finished showing them. By the way, if that grandchild is with you at the time, they will be totally embarrassed. Good Luck!
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Date: 4/15/2019 1:00:00 PM
Oh how true that is Curtis, haha. Yes I am a proud Grandma and my grandkids are now 21 and 18 and now tower above me! Thanks for your visit Curtis, nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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