What's Wrong With You

You don't like my hair,
I cut it too short.
You look lie you use nair!
Your hair had to abort!

I need to lose weight.
My butt is too big.
You think you look great?
You look lie a pig!

Lazy and weak, 
I act like a freak?
You would too
If you wore my shoe!

You love me, you hate me,
Make up your mind.
Open up and you might see
I'm a hell of a find!

What's wrong with you?
I think I know,
What I need to do.
I don't want to go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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April 10, 2016 at 2:09 AM
Jessica,,, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA** .
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