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What's Weighing Heavy On My Heart

I just feel compelled to say
what's weighing heavy on my Heart
but you've moved on, no wish to stay
or speak of what drove us apart.
It wounds me so, now that I know
you no longer care for me.
While I think of you- still dream of you!
You chill me with your apathy

*Very simple piece; I'm feeling rather placid and docile tonight ;)

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Mustapha Mohammed Date: 3/12/2014 7:45:00 PM I'm sorry to hear that you've been feeling rather down. Is everything currently okay with you? I can relate to such feelings. Simple, succinct, and heartfelt what often times makes great poetry. Good job partner. Raise that head up now. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 3/13/2014 11:52:00 AM Thanks, Mustapha. I am well now. This was written about an Ex of mine. Always a pleasure when you stop by :)

Vincent Flannery Date: 3/1/2014 6:55:00 AM Yes so heart wrenching. A feeling so many have felt. Yet believe all things happen for a reason and one day you will see it true. Enjoyed this poem very much and such heart felt sentiment. Best of luck in your way. Great write! Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 3/1/2014 2:56:00 PM Thanks for the read a nice comments, Vincent :)

Allan Koven Date: 2/20/2014 5:11:00 PM Dear ____________, Your emotions are laid bare for all to see. It must have been very hard for you to express your feelings about the relationship, but in my opinion, you did an exceptional job. Allan Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 2/21/2014 10:52:00 AM Much appreciated, Allan ;)

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/20/2014 2:53:00 PM I can relate to this poem from some time back, but time takes care of things.Now it's time for you to smile and move on with your life.... Lucilla Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 2/21/2014 10:52:00 AM Thanks for the review, Lucilla :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/19/2014 3:17:00 PM Apathy can indeed be very chilling! This was a good read! Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 2/19/2014 3:36:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. It's a very simple and direct poem; nothing fancy. I appreciate the read and compliment :)

Sophia Valentina Date: 2/19/2014 10:45:00 AM Sorry you didn't get the reaction you were hoping for... Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 2/19/2014 10:53:00 AM Will tell you all about it!

Tim Smith Date: 2/19/2014 7:55:00 AM This feeling would put anyone in a docile mood...Take care Tim Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 2/19/2014 8:41:00 AM Most indeed! Thanks for the read and comment, Tim :)

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 2/19/2014 2:10:00 AM Geez mate, you really aren't in a good place. Best of luck my friend, and may the night get better. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 2/19/2014 8:48:00 AM lol Trust me, Scott; I know EXACTLY what you mean. When I'm feeling low, snuggling with my babies always makes me feel better. I talked to my ex last night on FB, the one from NZ, and instead of the vitriolic hatred I expected, I was met with indifference, which, to me, is much worse than hatred. Some kind of emotion is better than no emotion, you know? Scott Thirtyseven Date: 2/19/2014 2:11:00 AM I just turned and hugged my dog. So the best advice I can give is 'hug a pet'.