What's On Your Mind Cat

What's on your mind cat? 
What are you thinking every time you are looking afar, 
every time you wiggle your tail and every time you look straight to my eyes? 

What's on your mind cat? 
What are you dreaming every time you sleep from morning till afternoon, 
every time you sleep on my lap 
and every time you sneak into my room to sleep beside me on the bed? 

What's on your mind cat? 
What are you saying every time you meow with  round eyes, 
every time you meow with a demanding tone 
and every time you purr and glide your head through my legs and hands. 

What's on your mind cat? 
What do you feel every time I cuddle you, 
every time I carry you in my arms and every time I hug you tight? 

What's on your mind cat? 
What do you hear every time I call your name, 
call you kitty or call you my baby? 
Do you even hear me or you just pretending you don't because you don't care at all? 

What's on your mind cat? 
Sometimes you are warm but mostly you are cold towards me.
Sometimes you are like a sweet baby but mostly you're an independent adult. 
My affection for you only works for a few minutes and eventually loses its effect.

I may not know what's on your mind cat. It must be a secret. 
A secret that blossom into beauty that makes everyone unable to resist chasing you. 

Cats are like women they might be complicated beings but they were also made to be adored and loved.


By: Doris Jamoner
Date: 06/23/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/29/2014 4:58:00 PM
I hope this is for the animal poetry contest, you could do well with this poem.
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Date: 9/30/2014 11:34:00 AM
Thank you.. This is not for the animal poetry contest.. I just dedicate this poem to my 7 cats at home hehe
Date: 7/27/2014 8:13:00 PM
Very interesting read, I enjoyed it to the fullness. Great poem, Doris. Keep your head to the sky. <3 Ken:)
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:16:00 PM
The ending threw me a bit, I was just you going with this being a poem about cats. I hadn't thought that you were going to change tack. Nicely done however, a good smooth read.
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:56:00 AM
good analogy here between women and cats...I thought you were headed towards cats and babies, which I guess is a logical conclusion, babies do grow up.
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Date: 6/29/2014 2:17:00 PM
- A enjoyable poem to read, Doris !!- Love it ! - especially like your last statement :) (it's true ...) - Thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/23/2014 8:42:00 PM
Very interesting poem, I enjoyed reading this piece. Always great to see your new poems. Take care friend< jess
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