What's On Your Mind?

What’s on your mind, what thoughts do you keep?
What’s locked in your heart and buried so deep?

Is there a storm clouding your blue skies?
There’s a truth you’re hiding behind those brown eyes

Tell me, my love, what has you tangled inside?
What’s pushing you away, what’s making you hide?

I’m always here to listen just open the door
Please share what’s on your mind and tell me more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Delegans Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 9:56 PM
Thanks, Mahtab! Appreciate the kind words.
Bangalee Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 2:17 AM
Lovely poem with enjoyable poetic expression.
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