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What's On Your Mind?

What’s on your mind, what thoughts do you keep? What’s locked in your heart and buried so deep? Is there a storm clouding your blue skies? There’s a truth you’re hiding behind those brown eyes Tell me, my love, what has you tangled inside? What’s pushing you away, what’s making you hide? I’m always here to listen just open the door Please share what’s on your mind and tell me more

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Date: 1/30/2025 9:56:00 PM
Thanks, Mahtab! Appreciate the kind words.
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Date: 1/29/2025 2:17:00 AM
Lovely poem with enjoyable poetic expression.
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