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Whats My Name?

I'm falling down a rabbit hole, Down, down, down. No...I'm not Alice... This isn't just a dream, This is our reality. I've never fallen faster, Never been so careless. Love at first sight, You make me fearless. Light catches seize of the shadows, In a white light washed night. Racing, speeding, down the way, Twist, twirl, curve, dip, in, out, in between, Up, down, inside out, night to day. The clocks hands fly, Each minute, second, passing faster by. You take my hand, It all just melts away. I'm lost in your arms, That kiss, I'm breathless. What's my name?

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Date: 10/13/2010 8:37:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kristina. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2010 4:30:00 AM
You are quite conscious that you are not Alice in wonderland, Nicely penned write, Kristina
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