William Kelii Kekaula Poet Monoku

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What's Bugging You - Hlm

*Image of Ladybugs by Pixabay.

What's Bugging You

a ladybug lands
another land in the midst
a breathtaking view

hey there hey there ladybug 
come right here and let us hug 
it's nice to hold
you're very bold
but I'm a lonely spark plug.

if you can't believe your own eyes then close them~~and use your other eye

2022 January 29
*2nd Place*
Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku
~~Charles Messina: Judged 2022 March 11

*HMS: 5,7,5 - 7,7,4,4,7 - 17

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Charles Messina March 16, 2022 at 7:47 PM Aloha William, sorry it took so long to comment on this brilliant and fun write. You did a great job combining these forms. My belated Congrats on your win in my contest! All the very best...Charlie God Bless William Kelii Kekaula March 16, 2022 at 8:22 PM Aole pilikia--Hawaiian slang for--no problem. Methinks the ku's made-up for my limey, Charlie, but I had fun in the process my friend, Aloha~William

Sara Kendrick March 14, 2022 at 3:55 AM I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara William Kelii Kekaula March 14, 2022 at 9:25 AM I am truly grateful, Sara, for your visit and thoughtful sharing my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith March 11, 2022 at 12:27 PM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. I love your 2 ladybugs. Have a blessed day..................... William Kelii Kekaula March 11, 2022 at 3:07 PM Most appreciated, Paula, on all your wondrous counts, and to yours as always, Aloha~William

I Am Anaya March 11, 2022 at 8:05 AM Awe, beautiful and sweet. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula March 11, 2022 at 8:40 AM Thank you, Anaya, and my compliments as well my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex March 11, 2022 at 5:04 AM Great moral. Beautifully written. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula March 11, 2022 at 8:39 AM Methinks it to be, thanks, Christuraj, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet January 29, 2022 at 5:29 AM William, your poetry, as well as the insights it contains, are excellent. My friend, you've done a fantastic job. "Win Big!" William Kelii Kekaula January 29, 2022 at 8:07 AM Thanks, Lasaad, for the encouragement, much appreciated my friend, Aloha!

Sara Kendrick January 29, 2022 at 3:42 AM Enjoyed reading this one today. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara William Kelii Kekaula January 29, 2022 at 4:12 AM I dunno, Sara, it was either the plug or a slug but I couldn't see it first off as huggable, ergo, fingers crossed, thanks for the opt'ism, Aloha!