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June 21, 2023

Whatever Happend To Jordan Contest

by  Miranda Hawley

There was once a young soul I’ll call Jordan He was a little on the wild side, a rebellious child Most expected he’d someday know the warden The one he’d answer to before being reconciled Freedom, it seems, we often take it for granted Like Jordan, I sometimes disregarded the rules It took some time for me to grow where I was planted I could be stubborn and obstinate, like the mules But, like Jordan, who became a regular light in the end I learned to live a life of kindness, caring about hearts Thanks to the love that I carry with me, the forever friend Who makes a way for Jordan and me, with grace off the charts… Jordan became a preacher, the leader of many people He carries hope inside his soul, a hope that grows and grows Because of that long ago bible school beneath the church steeple, He is a light to many who live in the dark – his love always shows… Jesus is the One friend we can carry with us through every fear Thanks to His love, there is grace beyond what we comprehend It is grace that takes away our sin, wipes away every single tear Reveals joy from believing in Him, the One who did ascend

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Date: 7/15/2023 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. I like that you drew a parallel between yourself and Jordan but then ended the poem with Jesus. That was fantastic. Great job.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 7/16/2023 3:52:00 AM
Thank you so much! Enjoyed writing. God bless you, Love, Gina
Date: 6/21/2023 12:08:00 PM
wow, you went all out , creating an excellent tale of what became of Jordan.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 7/16/2023 3:52:00 AM
Thank you sweet lady. Love and prayers, Gina
Date: 6/21/2023 4:20:00 AM
Jordan is a good example of how many people's lives evolve, Gina. None of us are perfect, and going astray is understandable, but the main point is that we eventually find the right path to follow. ~ Best regards // paul
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 7/16/2023 3:53:00 AM
Everyone has a past and most aren't perfect! Especially me. Love and prayers, friend, Love, Gina

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